In fact those whothought that the images higher up the attractiveness scale were real directlycorresponded with those who showed other makers for having higher self-esteem.
were realdirectly corresponded with 是谓语
我想问一下，be动词＋形容词，又和be correspondedwith短语搭配，如此可以吗？如何感觉怪怪的。
你混淆了主句和从句。 who thoughtthat the images higher up the attractiveness scale were real这是定语从句，修饰主句主语those，而directlycorresponded with是主句的谓语。你把从句的谓语和主句的谓语混淆在一块了。犯这个错误是什么原因你没句子的整体观，没考虑句子的主干结构是什么。